People, I observe
Events, I perceive
Unforgettable experiences
Meandering thoughts
Conflicting emotions
True feelings
Unrestrained expressions
Silhouettes’ of halcyon times
Lasting impressions
Soaring hopes
Innocent dreams
Indelible memories
Laughing tears
Crying smiles
Reverberations of past
Images of the present
Reflections of the future
An amalgamation of all these and more
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PS: Pic taken during the train journey from Goa to Jaipur. Date: 5th Jan 2009 Time: 06.12 am
It is an awakening of a very good Writer! :)
the link thing to download the pdf..... nice touch :)
In terms of character description the morning walk couple steals the show ....brilliantly described and u can feel the helplessness and also the reality behind ....perhaps the reality of it makes the helplessness even more dominant....
Other than that all the characters were well built ....fulfilling their roles ...from the devoted phoolwaala to the worker in construction site ....the duck analogy was great and the crashing of hope of construction site man was subtle and yet brutal.....
the guy at the shop lacked a bit ......it may be because that guy has been used so much in the movies he has been clichéd far too much for redemption...tough somewhere I thought you lacked.
The endline is something I really believe in and i think it’s a optimistic as well as pragmatic message.....
A remarkably rare combination.
Hey what a lovely description of morning..!!
loved the lines~
laughing tears
crying smiles
What a lovely description of morning with dreams..!!
specially loved the lines~
laughing tears
crying smile